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Bikini January (32 --?): Checking In
« on: February 01, 2024, 05:38:59 AM »
Man, you make a plan, and then exterior factors throw you a curve with the scheduling!

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Re: Bikini January (32 --?): Checking In
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2024, 06:09:14 AM »
Jay, you should get a medal for adaptability- and storytelling, of course!
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Re: Bikini January (32 --?): Checking In
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2024, 07:29:31 AM »
Man, you make a plan, and then exterior factors throw you a curve with the scheduling!

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I love, LOVE the story... though Choon-hae was very accepting of her boyfriend sleeping with another girl.  I think this needs to be expanded out...

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Re: Bikini January (32 --?): Checking In
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2024, 04:19:21 PM »
Well, I had more of Choon-hae's thinking in mind, but the caption was running long and didn't seem like it lent itself to being split, especially if I wanted both frames of a Bikini January cap to use bikini pics.  But maybe if you'll pardon a little "okay, not identical twins retcon...

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Re: Bikini January (32 --?): Checking In
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2024, 08:01:18 AM »
Thank you for continuing the story... I love how there are more characters with feelings going on.  I'm still processing what I think, but thank you.  More comments to come...

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