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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tedtheodorelogan Signed
definately an interesting start to what promises to be a really good story.
Date: April 05, 2012 10:05 AM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: mextro Signed
Great story got my juices going, thanks,
Date: October 12, 2011 02:03 PM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: AnabelSlut Signed
Very well written, and such an enticing story. Loved it, and I really hope you write another chapter!
Date: July 21, 2011 01:24 PM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: CTU Signed
You have not lost your touch for great story telling. Interesting idea that could be expanded upon and continued, but with a different patent of-course :)
Date: May 28, 2011 09:26 AM [Report This]
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