Reviews For Twisted Future
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Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: DrLychee Signed
Great writing, great storytelling. One note, in Chapter 3 Tomlin was promoted to Warrant Officer second class, dating a lieutenant. In Chapter 4 he's a Seargent Major. Is that an oversight or did I miss something?
Date: September 29, 2021 10:06 AM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: DrLychee Signed
Excellent writing and great storytelling. Great story.
Date: September 29, 2021 09:46 AM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: DrLychee Signed
Again excellent writting and very skillful storytelling. Keep up the excellent work.
Date: September 29, 2021 09:27 AM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: DrLychee Signed
Very well written, good flow and great storytelling skills. As a major science fiction fan, I was immediately hooked. Looking forward to more.
Date: September 29, 2021 07:42 AM [Report This]
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