Well, that explains Wolf. Yep, he's a madman that should have been stopped. Feh, fuck that. This is about a man being a woman! Except it's about a woman being a woman. This story falls off the X rating in this section and goes on about the very interesting topic of souls vs. bodies, as well as the reason there isn't much magic in today's world. Those are fun topics for debate, but writing at the X level should be more porno heavy--especially if you're going to take the time to give the real girl big tits and the changed man even bigger tits. That's my opinion. It is not humble :)

Author's Response: My intent with this story was to start as a simple (a naive) transformation tale and develop the plot to the philosophical discussion about genders, souls and, as you wrote, why we live in a non magical world today (of course, purely fiction). I hope you enjoyed also the pop culture references. I have no big experience in the porn area, so you are right: the sex passages could be improved. Maybe someone would like to help in assuming a co-authorship in this tale?

And there's the sex! Generally I don't like reviewing incomplete stories, all I can do is tell how I feel so far. Wolf confuses me. He's devious and incredibly powerful, meting out punishments as he sees fit. Yet he's awfully kind to his hostages. A setup? If so, I'd like to see the true terror of his wrath. In the butt if possible ^_^ Well, time to see how this ends. The ending really should be here; no need for a new chapter and review page.

Author's Response: Take a look at the first part of the "A Greek Story". I tried to do better sex scenes there (of course, it is more violent too). This was my first experience in publishing my stories, and, as I wrote in the forum, I translated them directly from portuguese (I am horrified with the amount of spelling and gramar errors I made), this is why the story structure is so weird. Hope to have some time in the future to work in this story again.

This story hits like a spiked club. It is not elegant or polished by any means but there is a beautiful and brutal simplicity in its effectiveness. A smile hopped on my face by the end of Chapter 3 as I realized how quickly the exposition filled us in and got us ready for some "good stuff" with some very, very buxom women. It's a personal failing, but I'm not very interested in boys learning to be girls--just magical curses and how messing with them gets people bound to sexual servitude. I hope to see that in the following chapters. So, like I said, club. If you like guys learning to be girls, this story is smashing. I'm moving onward in search of sex with super hot busty women.

a very enjoyable fairie tale with a nice natural twist

This story was awesome. My favorite part was the ending where the story delves into magic. It is kind of arthurian with what was will be again.

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, it means a lot!