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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: mignon Signed
I really like where this is going. I do wish you had switched to calling Davon to precious, though:) I hope you do continue to write. There is so much potential here.
Date: December 13, 2013 06:34 PM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: markos Signed
Really liked the story. Hope for more someday.

Author's Response: have you read the second part, and I am currently working on chapter 3 right now.
Date: May 18, 2013 08:47 PM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: abdul Signed
Good job with this - keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Hope you also read and enjoyed chapter 2, I am currently writing chapter 3 as we speak its a much longer chapter so far with more crazy hijinks.
Date: November 14, 2012 02:03 AM [Report This]
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