A pretty enough tale, but I don't like the part of the drug to change sexual orientation! Evidentially Tar doesn't know that gay and lesbian couples are parents too!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm well aware. It was something I felt had to be added, though, to make the reader's suspension of disbelief a little easier. Don't worry, I'm going expand on it a little more in future stories.
Reviews For First Day
Date: June 20, 2009 12:56 PM [Report This]