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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: smitty Signed
You do a good job of making such an unreal universe have a weight and reality to it.
Date: April 15, 2010 11:16 PM [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: RDA Signed
wow. Another great story! Really liked it, great storyline, great mystery. Although a bit worried about the trigger (maybe) being the sigs. Getting interesting when at the pool and how you are going to solve that. Cannot what for part three!

Author's Response: RDA: First of all, I very much appreciate the feedback you've left so far. As for the other NSH stories — there's roughly 21 of them on top of the two already at Rachel's Haven — I'll be reposting most of them here at RH as time permits (the ones that I might not repost are those penned by guest authors; I'm still debating if I should or shouldn't ... after all, it's my univese, but their stories). If you wish, RDA, you can venture over to Fictionmania and look under "Solari's Night Skies Hotel Universe" listing for all of the other stories. Lastly, worry not: the Capri 120 cigarettes are *not* the transformative agent. At least, not entirely. Mostly, they're there because, to me, smoking is something of a forbidden pleasure associated primarily with seduction and sex. Hence their use so far in some of the NSH stories. Yours in writing, RDA. Solari
Date: October 10, 2008 02:06 AM [Report This]
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